Substance

29 Jul

This is my spoken word about most (not all) of today’s pop music.

Almost all of it sounds the same. Almost none of it is fruitful. 
In December 2009, I came up with the idea, wrote some lines, and then moved on in my writing journal. I then wrote the “original” version in Spring 2010 as inspiration from the profound music of Paper Route. I was even able to recite the very first version in front of a couple of the Paper Route band members.
As I was reviewing my writing journal a few days ago, I came upon what I had written in December. It fit perfectly as the beginning to the original version.
So I put the two together and recited it publicly for the first time this week in Covina Park.  (The camera was too far to tell, but Mike (guitarist) and I both coincidentally wore Paper Route shirts. I’m also rocking my red PR wristband). I <3 Paper Route.


or watch it on Vimeo in full resolution.

Don’t get me wrong. I’m not a hater. It’s just that “I need good moral fiber for a spiritual bowel movement.”

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3 Responses to “Substance”

  1. Scott Smith August 17, 2010 at 8:13 am #

    Wow, Marlon, excellent stuff. I am going to have to think about the moral fibre spiritual bowel movement part… You’re very creative.

  2. notthefish August 18, 2010 at 1:23 am #

    thanks, Scott! you’re an inspiration. See you soon, Papa Bearface.

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